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Magazine Ad Draft

I am planning on reworking my magazine ad because Im not overall happy with the end result as it doesnt fit in very well with my digipak and is a little plain.

Second Draft

Digipak Draft

My initial draft for my digipak. I need to work on the front pannel of the digipak still as it doesnt work well with the rest of the pannels.

Digipak Progress

First Draft

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